12/2/25

Armando Aguilar

English 11000

For my Translation 2, I would like to implement that with my work throughout Phase 2 has been phenomenal and incredible for me to do. In my English class, we talked about how we used voice and heart to express how we want to touch our audience’s hearts and how it can build a huge impact of spreading awareness of what our audience could relate to these essays and work. My work has improved and changed from Phase 1 since I am more active with helping others instead of being self-indulgenting, while the synthesis essay talks about being considerate about how other people would relate to my essay and how they would feel about what my topic could have an impact on them. On Translation 1 with my Language and Literacy Narrative, I made a lot of mistakes and I was struggling to comprehend and fix my mistakes, while Translation 2 with the synthesis essay, I made fewer mistakes and became more focused and locked in since It is meant to be more professional than the language and literacy narrative writing since we are now required to do research and use sources to back up our claims. We need to understand that lots of our writing in Phase 2 gets more intense and more advanced as we want to be better writers. It was our time to help people to understand their situation where they could relate to our essays by the amount of effort we put into these essays. I believe this was a very useful assignment where we get to express strong emotions about our topics and get a chance to learn from our research. It may be argumentative, but it shows how strong we are to choose a side and get a chance to back it up with all our might. The way we brainstorm these ideas can make us better thinkers and improve our mindset that could help us with future assignments and goals. We can have the opportunity to practice on being more professional and improve ourselves as better writers. It may not be easy, but it may be a chance to make an impact. My essay could be good enough for my peers to read my essay because I included evidence and emotion into my essay that could make my essay worth reading. The importance of self reflection is how we can implement some thoughts which do not have to be perfect into our essays since other people would feel the same about it. Also, it’s important to note that people’s perspectives are also important to include because they may have some experiences on how they felt when they were in that situation where they may feel different than they did before the incident. They learn a lot from those situations and want to learn wisdom from them. That’s why there are sources where authors have their point of views on their situations and how they can build strength from writing them down. I want to be a worthy writer since people do give feedback and use that feedback as a way to find more understanding and more efficient processing of our ways of thinking. This could improve our mindset that came from the heart and to express our thoughts about this topic. This made me more connected to writing because this shows that writing could make someone emotionally change and improve how they feel about what they are writing about. It shows how much it could lead to more advancedness as we were throughout our previous works. Their synthesis essay made me stronger and want to learn more about what people struggle in life, not just about my topic alone, but also my other topics I did during my days of school back then. I’m proud of my work and I’m glad I made my professor satisfied with my work, and I hope my other essays were enough to make my professor proud.